Example A: The comma.
1.
2.
Example B:
Two paragraphs, the same words, totally different meanings.
To be spoken with feeling………
Christmas 1
Johnny had a lot of money that he could spend. On himself, he said, he would spend nothing. On his brothers and sisters he was going to spend a lot of his pocket money. To buy sweets, books, models and other luxuries for himself was not his main aim. To have a good time this Christmas, he was going to give presents to other people only. If they gave him bigger presents in return, he was certainly going to be disappointed.
OR
Christmas 2
Johnny had a lot of money that he could spend on himself. He said he would spend nothing on his brothers and sisters. He was going to spend a lot of his pocket money to buy sweets, books, models and other luxuries for himself. Was not his main aim to have a good time this Christmas? He was going to give presents to other people only if they gave him bigger presents in return. He was certainly going to be disappointed.
Example C
Example D
Missing Full Stop after “HUNTING”.
Example E
Unwanted first full stop changes the meaning a lot!
Example F
Example G
Just for fun………